Tokkaebi Tiger (Masked): Development

Above is a mock up for the Masked Tokkaebi Tiger. I like the direction I am taking where the creatures exist in a Korean folk painting (Min-Hwa) style world.

The presentation of the tiger above is a work in progress:

I think the tree needs more refinement. Where the tree branch obscures part of the sun doesn't look convincing at the moment.

The tail of the creature could be longer and curve around into the foreground of the image.

The format and crop of the layout may need changing too. Would a narrower crop suit the 'folk art' aesthetic? Is there too much empty space above the crouching creature?

The mask of the creature could be more convincing. Does it look like the creature just has a contrasting coloured face?

Below is the development sheet for the Masked Tokkaebi Tiger. I was inspired by the creepy look of an Aye Aye. Also, I found a beautiful Korean kite based upon a Phoenix that inspired the tail of the creature.

Below is a scroll painting from the Joseon dynasty (1392-1910). I would like to experiment with brushes to create a tree like the pine in the background. Also, close crop of the scroll painting is something I could try with my image above.

Unknown Artist (late 1700s) Tiger Family [hanging scroll; ink and colour on paper]. Available at: http://www.clevelandart.org/(Accessed/downloaded: 11 July 2014)